New Song! The creative Juices are Flowing

So this song probably will not be pleasing to the eye because you cant hear the tune. I actually wrote guitar music with this one... shocking I know. Tell me what you think.

After all this time of forgiving you

I could never say what you want me to

After all this time of you telling lies

I can see right through your alibis

Oh oh oh, like a dark thief in the night

Oh oh oh, all along she was right

You have always said to me

I was the one you did not deserve

I developed such a hatred then

For the person who did not deserve

Oh oh oh, enemies with someone unknown

Oh oh oh, the real devil was so close

All the time were fooling them

To thinking we were happy when

She is suffereing cuz she is alone

But really im the one who is

Alone, oh oh, youre here but im still

Alone, oh oh, A devil makes you feel so.. 

Everyday is a heart attack

That I cannot get you back

The devil came and stole my heart

And tried to tear my world apart

Now we are worlds apart

Now we are worlds apart 

*improv*